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Bequest

September 28, 2018 8 Comments

Bequest

By Mahesh Nair

Morgan, like Olivia, plastered the front of the fridge with sticky notes: Piano class, Prom day, Shopping. So many reminders that the brown refrigerator grew yellow lumps around a lone pink note, Kiss her, almost peeling off.

She relished her daughter, reliving her own teens, repeating what her mother did, keeping it between herself and a lab guy.

Olivia had daubed notes until she was in the last stage of her cancer, and it was only after she’d kissed her granddaughter and died, that Morgan found her mother’s pink note among an inane growth of yellow on the fridge, retaining it.

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  1. cascondaville says

    September 28, 2018 at 7:21 am

    So many important things get lost in the quick, fast-paced shuffle of life. You said it so well.

    Reply
    • Mahesh Nair says

      September 28, 2018 at 7:12 pm

      Love this comment. Thanks a lot for your time.

      Reply
  2. balroop2013 says

    September 29, 2018 at 2:42 pm

    Poignancy well defined! Profoundly meaningful fiction that could be a reality of many people.

    Reply
    • Mahesh Nair says

      September 29, 2018 at 7:50 pm

      Thanks a lot, Balroop. So happy to hear from you.

      Reply
  3. Brian says

    September 29, 2018 at 8:22 pm

    A great and touching story.

    Reply
    • Mahesh Nair says

      September 30, 2018 at 9:08 am

      Thanks Brian. Really appreciate your time.

      Reply
  4. Mary E Falkner says

    September 30, 2018 at 1:31 am

    Beautiful, beautiful.

    Reply
    • Mahesh says

      September 30, 2018 at 9:09 am

      Thanks Mary. Glad you liked it.

      Reply

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