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Beside the Seaside

January 15, 2018 2 Comments

Beside the Seaside

By Danny Beusch

The woman and a boy stand apart under a smudged charcoal sky as the grey water laps their sandy feet. She’d hoped for a saffron sun, a sapphire sea. She’d hoped for anything but this.

“Are you having fun?” she asks.

He stares ahead.

“You can talk to me.”

He can see an island, craggy and deserted. He wonders how far away it is; too far to swim.

“Call me ‘Mum.’ Please. I’m your mum now.”

She takes his hand. It is limp, sticky with ice cream tears.

And then she lets go, turns around, walks away.

At last, she smiles.

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  1. marisa martinez says

    January 17, 2018 at 11:51 am

    why did the women tell the boy to call her mum now?

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    • Danny Beusch says

      January 19, 2018 at 9:55 am

      She has adopted him. It’s a story about adoption breakdown.

      Reply

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