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Best Friend

February 8, 2018 6 Comments

Best Friend

By Zihan

I rested my forehead against her, closing my eyes.

“Hey there, Willow,” I whispered as she filled my senses. The rough texture of bark, the crisp scent of sap, and the chime of rustling leaves drew past memories—foolish childhood secrets, lazy summer days, Mom passing away.

“You’re going to a better place now,” I assured her. Despite all this, I smiled with watery eyes and whispered my goodbye.

As the noise of chainsaws filled the air, I left. I did not protest. I did not grieve. I just looked back on our time together, appreciating that our paths ever crossed.

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  1. Susan says

    February 8, 2018 at 9:39 am

    A beautiful tribute. Well done!

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  2. Joy thomas says

    February 8, 2018 at 11:17 am

    Lovely, very sensitive.

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  3. Shoshauna says

    February 8, 2018 at 4:34 pm

    Very powerful! There are 3 words that make this totally work, in my opinion: “…Mom passing away.” Kudos!

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 8, 2018 at 4:36 pm

    Very moving. Very well written. Give us more!

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  5. Zavia says

    February 12, 2018 at 10:54 pm

    Nostalgia incarnate. Beautiful and relatable. Dad, in the way it is sad when someone very old who lived a good life passes. I love this.

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  6. museworthyman says

    February 13, 2018 at 3:59 am

    Whispers, willow, chimes, rustles, tears…and a chainsaw.

    A winning combo—Fab. @Zihan 🙂

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