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Big Brother

July 19, 2017 3 Comments

Big Brother

By Meghashri Dalvi

“We have to cover three points today, sir. The first is to review the curated footage of key citizens.”

“OK.”

“Then you need to be found standing in a queue. Maybe in the state-cafeteria at lunch time?”

“Fine.”

“The third point is to be seen paying by yourself, sir.”

“You know I don’t carry a wallet.”

“I am aware, sir. But we must post those photos today. To counter yesterday’s news.”

“Hmmm.”

“So maybe you can stop suddenly, ditch the convoy, and buy something from a roadside vendor.”

“Now you are pushing me.”

“No option, sir. They are watching us, too.”

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  1. Jack Spies says

    July 19, 2017 at 7:46 am

    Give one pause, Meghashri. I hope we’re all listening – and hearing. Well done.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    July 19, 2017 at 9:23 pm

    Yeah, this one makes you look over your shoulder to see who might be watching! Good job.

    Reply
  3. Anne Wilding says

    July 23, 2017 at 4:07 am

    It makes a change read a hopeful take on the rise of social media. This story made me happy. Thanks x

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