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Bill Collector

October 3, 2016 8 Comments

Bill Collector

By Don Tassone

It was a starter-home subdivision filled with thirty-somethings.

All the houses were new except one. Herman lived there alone; he was widowed before his young neighbors were even born. He took walks every day, but no one stopped to talk with him.

With budgets tight, most neighbors gathered to play cards on Friday nights.

“We didn’t get an electric bill last month,” Matt said. “They said it’d been paid in cash.”

“Funny,” said Lindsey. “Same thing with our water bill.”

The young homeowners were busy. They never paid much attention to the old man, shuffling along the sidewalks, following the mailman.

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Comments

  1. Bobby Warner says

    October 3, 2016 at 5:32 pm

    Nice, heart-warming little story.

    Reply
    • dontassone says

      October 3, 2016 at 7:20 pm

      Thanks, Bobby. I’m glad you liked this story.

      Reply
  2. alphabetstory says

    October 3, 2016 at 6:24 pm

    NICE LITTLE TWIST TO A DELIGHTFUL TALE.

    Reply
    • dontassone says

      October 3, 2016 at 7:20 pm

      Thank you.

      Reply
  3. Pascal Inard says

    October 3, 2016 at 10:55 pm

    Beautiful story Don, generous like Herman who is a true hero.

    Reply
    • dontassone says

      October 4, 2016 at 3:20 am

      Thank you, Pascal.

      Reply
  4. Libby Belle says

    May 30, 2021 at 6:30 pm

    Aww, that made me smile, and then frown, and then smile again. Herman can come to my house anytime, and we won’t play cards, we’ll talk over wine and music. There are angels all around us. Thank you for reminding me to look closer, Mr. Tassone.

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    • Don Tassone says

      May 30, 2021 at 8:06 pm

      Thank you, Libby. Yes, there are angels all around us.

      Reply

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