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Bingo

April 19, 2016 6 Comments

Bingo

By Prospero Dae

“B24,” enunciated the sparkle-toothed orator dressed in a pea-green jacket, his hand-wavy gestures ensorcelling a small crowd of idle-minded participants.

“Bingo!” trumpeted a voice from the hall.

And from this inauspicious start in a church basement, a life of cards and off-track betting began.

I’ll cut to the chase: the vice squad raided a bordello—the nadir of this sordid tale—and arrested a green-jacketed man, caught in flagrante delicto with a contortive catwoman and a tidy wad of cash.

“B24,” enunciated the prison warden: our gambler was in Block B–Cell 24, counting cigarettes and placing bets for idle-minded participants.

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  1. dontassone says

    April 19, 2016 at 10:29 am

    A morality tale in a candy wrapper. Well done!

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  2. Cynthia Jobin says

    April 19, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Ah the journeys that begin in church basements! Yet it’s good to have not just a career, but an actual vocation, so that you can find satisfying work wherever you happen to go.

    A very deft weaving of numerology and fate!

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    April 19, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Gritty, humorous, ironic. You’ve put it all in there, Prospero…and outdone yourself this time. Great going!

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  4. jlcourtney says

    April 19, 2016 at 11:03 am

    Ha! One of my favorite 101 Words writers. I always look forward to the Prospero Dae stories.

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  5. Gloria says

    April 19, 2016 at 3:33 pm

    Liked this one a lot.

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  6. Stickup Artist says

    May 4, 2016 at 4:57 pm

    I love this one! I always relate Bingo to sordidness too. I was driving back from the desert once year ago and stopped at a crumbling gambling casino in one of those rundown desert towns to use the bathroom. I had to pass through the Bingo room to get to the lavatory. It was like passing through one of the rings of hell, a smoke-filled room full of crypt keepers. Bingo scares me.

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