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Bird in Hand

September 4, 2015 2 Comments

By Dana Mele

The little thing was unharmed, new wings downy-soft. The remains of the mother were spread in blue tufts at the sidewalk’s edge. A cat, we figured, maybe a hawk.

“Let’s kill it,” Allison said.

I curled my fingers protectively around the baby bird, feeling its warmth and little thrumming heartbeat.

“We could feed it. Keep it in a shoebox until it’s strong enough to survive.”

“It never will be.” Allison lifted a loose stone from the curb, big enough to kill.

“No.” I placed the bird down in the grass, figuring I wasn’t a killer if I didn’t see it die.

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  1. Deb says

    September 13, 2015 at 5:18 pm

    Love the descriptions of the baby bird.
    I could feel it in MY hands- soft downy feathers , heart beating.

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    • MIke says

      September 24, 2015 at 9:58 am

      I like the reasioning in last sentence. It seems to hint at inner conflict.

      Reply

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