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Blood Rubies

July 29, 2016 14 Comments

Blood Rubies

By Alex Reece Abbott

Rubies cluster above your head: constant dark teardrops that stream down the plastic artery to your arm. Soon, you’ll be able to get on with your life again.

“That’s why we call it lifeblood,” says the nurse, replacing a drained bag with a plump, new sachet.

She monitors you for allergic reactions, saying, “Huh…five units…over half your natural allocation. The national database tracks donor identity, but I can tell you, it’s English. So, after we’re done here, you’ll be English. Maybe Yorkshire, if you’re lucky.”

Infused with lifeblood rubies, intimate and strange, you wonder: whose life will you live now?

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Comments

  1. Jayne Martin says

    July 29, 2016 at 9:29 am

    Oh, I love this! That first line is pure gold.

    Reply
    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 29, 2016 at 4:18 pm

      Thanks Jayne. Gold and rubies, good match 🙂

      Reply
  2. lquisp says

    July 29, 2016 at 9:35 am

    That was pretty cool!!

    Reply
    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 29, 2016 at 4:19 pm

      Thanks so much for reading

      Reply
  3. dbpela says

    July 29, 2016 at 9:46 am

    Vampires indeed!

    Reply
    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 29, 2016 at 4:20 pm

      Thanks for reading dbp

      Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    July 29, 2016 at 12:01 pm

    Tongue in cheek humor, nicely written. Good imagery.

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    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 29, 2016 at 4:21 pm

      Thanks Bobby, glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  5. Ved Sharma says

    July 29, 2016 at 9:25 pm

    Oh it is superb string of words with an insight and wandering of idea built into.

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    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 31, 2016 at 1:53 am

      Thanks Ved, you do have to store your wandering ideas somewhere 🙂

      Reply
  6. sueannporter1 says

    July 30, 2016 at 12:36 pm

    I immediately thought of Blood Diamonds, and then took the journey with the Blood Rubies. Very good!

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    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      July 31, 2016 at 1:54 am

      Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  7. Joanna Bressler says

    July 31, 2016 at 4:44 pm

    Marvelous. The “you” voice instantly pulled me in, which it doesn’t always do. Such an original story.

    Reply
    • @AlexReeceAbbott says

      August 1, 2016 at 1:22 am

      Thanks Joanne…I did debate that one for a while myself :). Glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply

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