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Blotter Notes

March 28, 2017 8 Comments

Blotter Notes

By Peter Kahn

The dead can’t speak, he tells himself.

But the house is filled with voices. He walks from room to room wondering if he’s missed anything. The movers are coming the next day. Certain furniture is tagged with the name of someone and the instructions, “Do not remove,” in his father’s handwriting. On a blotter, on a desk, among the many scribbles and doodles accumulated over the years, a childish hand has written, “I hate momy.” Who wrote this, when and why?

Then it comes to him.

He pulls out his phone. “Mom?…I just wanted to say that I love you.”

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  1. Meghashri says

    March 28, 2017 at 4:02 am

    Very well written!

    Reply
    • Peter says

      March 29, 2017 at 2:57 pm

      Thanks so much.

      Reply
  2. Gena says

    March 28, 2017 at 6:49 am

    Awwww! Triple love the entire story. I moved easily through this story.

    Reply
    • Peter says

      March 29, 2017 at 2:58 pm

      Thanks for the reassurance.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 28, 2017 at 11:37 am

    A very neat and heart-warming story. Liked it!

    Reply
    • Peter says

      March 29, 2017 at 2:59 pm

      I’m so glad. Thanks.

      Reply
  4. Jim says

    March 28, 2017 at 3:12 pm

    Perfect! I’m jealous

    Reply
    • Peter says

      March 29, 2017 at 3:00 pm

      mighty kind of you, thanks.

      Reply

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