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Body Fat

September 11, 2020 8 Comments

By Ronit Mukherji

His coworkers called Mark fat. Behind his back, but never to his face. Human Resources banned body shaming. Instead they recommended intermittent fasting, keto diets, and fancy gym equipment.

Science said fat was stored energy his body may call upon. He preferred that explanation.

Ten minutes of exercise increases life span by eight minutes, he read. What a waste of two minutes.

His plane went down during his summer vacation. Most passengers survived the crash but starved on a deserted island awaiting rescue.

A boat rescued Mark six months later—the new Mark, who had lost more than a hundred pounds.

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  1. Constanée Malik Hemedi says

    September 11, 2020 at 7:20 am

    A complete story in 101 words – and with a happy end. What a great way to start the weekend!

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  2. Rathin Bhattacharjee says

    September 11, 2020 at 10:34 am

    Fantastic writing. I would have been happier had Mark been rescued a few months after the crash though. Six months in the deserted island seem a bit too long to survive.

    Reply
  3. Steffi Samuel says

    September 11, 2020 at 1:11 pm

    Excellent!!

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  4. Steffi Samuel says

    September 11, 2020 at 1:11 pm

    Excellent so good .

    Reply
  5. Swagata says

    September 11, 2020 at 1:21 pm

    Wow….cool …. happy for Mark

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  6. Michael D. Brown says

    September 11, 2020 at 1:50 pm

    Does it take that much suffering to get on the right side of things?

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  7. Ranjan says

    September 11, 2020 at 2:14 pm

    Amusing. Enjoyed the positive tone in a bleak situation.

    Reply
  8. Liz Falkner says

    September 12, 2020 at 3:34 am

    Love it!!!

    Reply

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