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Brad’s First Day

July 23, 2018 5 Comments

Brad’s First Day

By Mark Reels

Brad stood in the driveway and nudged the gravel with the work boots Chelsea had bought for him. He had a cigarette in one hand and his lunch pail in the other.

She had thought about adding a note of encouragement to the lunch pail, but she didn’t want to risk embarrassing him in front of the other men.

Brad kicked the stones again and searched the ground as though hoping to uncover some valuable thing that he had lost.

When his brother’s truck pulled up, she lifted her hand from her pregnant belly to wave, but he didn’t look back.

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  1. Glenn Bowman says

    July 23, 2018 at 8:41 am

    Good story, Mark. We get lost in our everyday dreams, and the demands of the day. But life moves on whether we pay attention or go our own way.

    Reply
    • Mark Reels says

      July 23, 2018 at 4:56 pm

      Thanks, Glenn

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    July 23, 2018 at 10:48 am

    Good, bittersweet story. An excellent reminder to husbands (or wives) to appreciate their spouse a heck of a lot more than they do!

    Reply
    • Mark Reels says

      July 23, 2018 at 4:56 pm

      Thanks, Bobby

      Reply
  3. Debbie says

    July 23, 2018 at 7:20 pm

    A reminder to Love ! Thank of others and just love with notes hugs sweet words of encouragement and hope of much more to come the baby a better life from working hard and loving with a pure heart. Great story!

    Reply

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