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July 27, 2020 5 Comments

By Coco Jane

3:22 a.m. I am snug and warm. Pressed tight, in fact.

Oh, my! A bright light, and cold, and strange sounds!

Something is touching me. Cold, and hard, and—alien. I flail and writhe.

I cry out in agony. So very loud!

More lights, noises, textures. What is happening to me?

I’m tipped and whirling. So many sensations! Life as I knew it is gone. What IS this existence?

Okay, somewhat snug again. A little warmer. But that light! I squinch my eyes tight.

“Mom, Dad, we had a boy! Asher Jackson. Eight pounds, eleven ounces. Born at 3:22 this morning.”

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  1. Cathy Cade says

    July 27, 2020 at 7:32 am

    Nice one

    Reply
  2. Karisa Moore says

    July 27, 2020 at 7:45 am

    Birth is traumatic. I like how you described the transition from trauma to security wrapped up in mom or dad’s arms.

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    • Coco says

      July 27, 2020 at 2:00 pm

      Thanks. I chose Asher Jackson because that’s the name of a recent arrival in a friend’s family.

      Reply
  3. Rebecca says

    July 28, 2020 at 3:22 pm

    Super story! My son’s name…Asher?

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    • Rebecca says

      July 28, 2020 at 3:22 pm

      Not sure why I put a question mark!

      Reply

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