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Brass Lungs

November 7, 2016 3 Comments

Brass Lungs

By Josh McKenna

The vital peal of a jazz band’s brass radiated pulsating warmth onto the dark, autumnal street. The pale moon hung celestial: vengeful puppeteer of the sea.

A tidal hush swelled over the vast city.

Drums pounded. Chocolate bass notes thumped a line. The saxophonist blew, releasing his soul in a throbbing cry of cosmic rapture. The ominous hush deepened as the sea crept closer.

Closer, closer. The old trumpeter felt it. The furtive tide would drown him; he wasn’t strong enough to hold his breath.

But, without music, what was he?

Desolation corrupted him, and with him drowned the final sound.

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  1. nostalgicablog says

    November 7, 2016 at 4:28 pm

    A haunting lament. Loved it.

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  2. b. says

    November 7, 2016 at 5:41 pm

    Very powerful imagery. Thanks for a great story.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    November 7, 2016 at 8:32 pm

    A good soul whose greatest love is of music (and/or what it represents). Beautiful and haunting story.

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