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Breath of Faith

October 10, 2018 7 Comments

Breath of Faith

By Copper Rose

Andrew’s infant son had been diagnosed with cystic fibrosis. Shaking Leaf, the medicine woman, unwrapped the eagle feather and lit the dried sage in the sacred bowl.

“What is your son’s name?” Shaking Leaf asked.

“Erin.”

“Cystic fibrosis? This is your way of saying there’s a problem with your son’s lungs?”

“Yes, it is.”

Shaking Leaf doused the smoldering sage and wrapped up the eagle feather.

“What are you doing? Why are you packing up your medicine kit? Aren’t you going to help?”

“Your boy is already protected.”

“What do you mean?”

“His protection lies within his name.”

“Erin?”

“Air in.”

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  1. taekwondocathy says

    October 10, 2018 at 10:09 am

    Whoa! Nice.

    Reply
  2. Cheryl Gonring says

    October 10, 2018 at 11:38 am

    I agree! Whoa and nice!

    Reply
    • cascondaville says

      October 10, 2018 at 12:59 pm

      Thanks Cheryl! It popped into my head one day. 🙂

      Reply
  3. Diane Sommers says

    October 11, 2018 at 6:44 am

    Copper Rose never disappoints! ?

    Reply
    • cascondaville says

      October 11, 2018 at 9:12 am

      Thank you Diane! I’m glad you visited the site. There are some very wonderful short stories here. 😉

      Reply
  4. Rich Calo says

    October 12, 2018 at 11:22 am

    Haha. Sweet!

    Reply
  5. D Lyons says

    October 13, 2018 at 8:07 am

    Another masterpiece!

    Reply

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