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Burnt

September 23, 2016 1 Comment

Burnt

By Riley Sadlier

If my mistake hurts you, it hurts me too. It burns a hole in my ribcage, making it easier for you to lay your head on my chest, to see right through me.

You won’t leave me; I won’t leave you.

So we remain.

Waiting for a moment of pure ecstasy so that I can once again ruin it and you can dwell in the misery that you love so much. Craving that toxic sadness.

As I sabotage myself and you beg me for a pain that you can’t find anywhere else, I cry out. But you won’t let me go.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    September 23, 2016 at 10:05 am

    These lovers just beg for punishment–and it looks like they’ll get it!

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