By Vibha
Her rage resonates through the valley. I can hear her even through the thick cover of trees. I have not walked along that stony path for a long time. I am wary of meeting you.
You had laughed when I said the river was infuriated. But now you know she was irked.
I hear someone call out, an echo sailing through the raging gurgle. Is it a distant whisper from you?
I feel her fury as I walk towards the rocks. The river keeps crashing into them. Maybe they vex her. You were not enough. She wants more. I am coming.
You wrap up this story beautifully. “She wants more. I am coming.” Very spooky.
Thanks, I am glad you liked it.
Oh! I love the beautiful wordplay. And the end I makes me think of a million scenarios. I love loose ends. Makes me think. Good job!!
Thanks once again dear
‘…an echo sailing through the raging gurgle’. Lovely.
🙂 Thank you.
Great ending!
Thanks. I am glad you liked it
Very surreal; almost mystic. Very apt title.
Thanks I feel encouraged to write more