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Cat Grin

August 30, 2019 7 Comments

Cat Grin

By A.M. McKnight

Pastor asked, “Do you, Gladys, take Roy to be your husband?”

A lump caught in Gladys’ throat. I do, she thought but couldn’t verbalize.

“Will you?” Pastor asked again with a smile.

Gladys had known that cat grin since she was knee-high to the altar. It always came with a request like: can you tithe a little more this Sunday or can you drive Sister Rose to the doctor. Gladys always gave and always said yes.

She looked at Roy, Pastor’s son, and saw the same grin. He wore Pastor’s Sunday suit.

“No,” she answered. Gladys was no longer taking requests.

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  1. Davena O' Neill says

    August 30, 2019 at 7:20 am

    good girl Gladys

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  2. Lynda Kirby says

    August 30, 2019 at 7:24 am

    Nice one.

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  3. Debra says

    August 30, 2019 at 10:03 am

    I liked the description as a Cat Grin. Also loved the imagery of his wearing his father’s suit. Well done.

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  4. Declan Hill says

    August 30, 2019 at 11:50 am

    Lovely positive stuff

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  5. Eric Pederson says

    August 30, 2019 at 5:27 pm

    Excellent!

    I love the asking of the vows portrayed as the real question it is, even if very few consider it something to which they can say no.

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  6. Debbie Settle says

    August 30, 2019 at 9:35 pm

    That was great. I should have done what Gladys did on more than one occasion!

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  7. Susan says

    September 3, 2019 at 9:12 am

    You go, girl! What a great story.

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