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Character Study

February 24, 2016 10 Comments

Character study

By Jennifer L Freed

Ben felt his father bristling whenever Grandpa Thorne visited. He sensed it had to do with Grandpa’s endless anecdotes about life down in Florida, back when Ben’s mother was a baby and times were good.

Grandpa would begin, “Our plumber—great guy, always laughing, he was Black—he once…”

Ben’s mother would gently redirect the conversation.

“Lee—a hard-working fellow—a Chinaman…”

Ben’s father would remember some business calls he had to make.

One evening, Grandpa said confidentially, while Ben’s parents were cleaning up dinner, “Your Dad’s a good man, a good husband. He’s a Jew, but he’s a good man.”

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  1. majokmindfuleating says

    February 24, 2016 at 11:56 am

    this reminds me of my mother who always tells me if someone is black and if her nurse is male

    Reply
    • Jennifer Freed says

      February 24, 2016 at 1:42 pm

      Thank you. I’m glad it could strike a chord. How we decide whether things are relevant–I wonder what things I’ll find myself saying that my children or grandchildren will say are telling signs of my prejudices or judgements.

      Reply
  2. TISA GARRISON says

    February 24, 2016 at 11:58 am

    Brilliantly told. I 100% relate. Really enjoyed the reading of it.

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    • Jennifer Freed says

      February 24, 2016 at 1:43 pm

      Thank you! It is fiction, yet based on a real memory.

      Reply
  3. Tony Press says

    February 24, 2016 at 1:55 pm

    As true as can be, told via fiction. Good one.

    Reply
  4. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    February 24, 2016 at 6:55 pm

    Micro-fiction with a point. Nicely done.

    Reply
  5. Jennifer Freed says

    February 24, 2016 at 7:11 pm

    Thank you, Lisa and Tony.

    Reply
  6. Bobby Warner says

    February 25, 2016 at 9:08 am

    Quite realistic, Jennifer. I’m sure we’ve all known someone like Ben’s grandfather. In fact, most of us have more of the old man’s characteristics than we’d like to admit! Good story!

    Reply
  7. Todd Hoffman says

    February 25, 2016 at 11:01 am

    Well done — I remember something like this in my wonderful family. I wonder how much is generational?… Much progress has been made, but then there’s trump & co.

    Reply
  8. Jennifer Freed says

    March 10, 2016 at 10:49 am

    Thank you, Bobby and Todd, for taking the time to comment!

    Reply

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