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Choices

February 5, 2020 6 Comments

Choices

By Yash Seyedbagheri

Parents demand you choose a parent in the divorce. No pressure.

Pick me, proclaims Mother. She dons a starched smile. I can give you a nice townhouse, books. I’ll teach you ideas and philosophies, unlike your philistine father.

Pick me, proclaims Dad. I can teach you to fight, hide sensitivity. Learn to seize the world.

But they don’t speak a word about love. Don’t tell you how they view love and connection. They don’t mention what they love most in you.

They throw you like a football. You fly into the air, waiting to land in someone’s arms.

It never happens.

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  1. Kenzie Edgar says

    February 5, 2020 at 7:51 am

    So well written. I hope it wasn’t experienced by you.

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  2. Jen HQ says

    February 5, 2020 at 7:56 am

    Terribly sad story. Very well written.

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  3. Susan says

    February 5, 2020 at 8:40 am

    A sad tale of our times. Beautifully written.

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  4. lisafriedlanderlicsw says

    February 5, 2020 at 9:05 am

    I really felt moved by this story.

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  5. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    February 5, 2020 at 9:57 am

    1st line draws you in. Last line gives closure. Thoughtful, inciteful and well written.

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  6. Stella Klein says

    February 5, 2020 at 2:37 pm

    So moving. So simply put. Three rich characters in a tiny piece.

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