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Coach

May 20, 2016 1 Comment

Coach

By Donald Hubbard

Coach cocks back his right arm and with the knuckle of his middle finger protruding from his fist, he punches my sternum.

I know this time that it’s because I smiled for the team yearbook photo.

A skinny sprinter, I’m subjecting myself to an unprovoked drowning to avoid being cut. The bruises will only fade after assuming all colors of the rainbow.

I sense coach isn’t finished. His pupils dilate: two pools of unsated sadism.

“You flinched. It didn’t count. Back against the wall,” he demands.

Unblinking, I return to attention. Coach flicks out his knuckle, cocking back his right arm.

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  1. John La Briola says

    May 22, 2016 at 12:48 am

    Fine writing — the rainbow-colored bruises caught my eye — and the bizarre, high treasonous crime of smiling. I remember a pee-wee/drill sargeant football coach who made his own son quarterback and subjected that poor kid to never-ending torment, extra wind-sprints etc. Glad I got cut from that dumb squad.

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