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Color By Numbers

May 16, 2020 8 Comments

Color By Numbers

By Picasso Diablo

“Are we poor?” My son looked up to me from the cold kitchen floor.

An impossible question, coming from a toddler. Had David been a few years older, I could’ve explained the difference between having money and being rich; explained that things weren’t so simple. But David was at that age where life’s gray areas hadn’t entered his reality yet—David still lived in black and white.

So I should have given him a reassuring, “Of course not, David,” and explained it to him later, but instead I angrily blurted out, “Who told you that?”

Thus I colored his world forever.

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  1. rolandmiles says

    May 16, 2020 at 7:17 am

    Leaves an echo. Great work.

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  2. Cathy Cade says

    May 16, 2020 at 7:34 am

    Insightful for one so brief- well done.

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  3. b. says

    May 16, 2020 at 9:28 am

    Some words that escape our lips cause an unforeseen reign of terror.

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  4. cascondaville says

    May 16, 2020 at 11:53 am

    That hit me right between the eyes! The title – the story! Just WOW!

    Reply
  5. Meghashri says

    May 16, 2020 at 12:54 pm

    Excellent!

    Reply
  6. SandyVF says

    May 19, 2020 at 7:43 am

    Ouch! Like a slap in the face!!

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  7. SandyVF says

    May 19, 2020 at 7:45 am

    Great name by the way… Picasso Diablo

    Reply
  8. ifana8 says

    May 27, 2020 at 7:15 am

    Philosophical

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