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Commencement

October 6, 2020 7 Comments

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Each of them is given a dark robe to wear. A bulky chrysalis. Or a magician’s cape, behind which they are already changing.

The two sit down together. She remembers sleepovers at his house, and how later she could have talked to him on the phone all night.

Now he shouts too-loud jokes to friends, as if it’s not really the end. She clasps her hands, beginning to look away, to look ahead. Then it’s her turn to rise and walk to the podium. Suddenly light, expectant.

He holds on to her empty chair.

Her robe flutters around her, like wings.

By Christina Holbrook

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  1. Cathy Cade says

    October 6, 2020 at 7:23 am

    Love it. I began to expect a final apocalypse, but it turned out as a metamorphosis. Nicely engineered in 101 words

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  2. Tom Stewart says

    October 6, 2020 at 7:32 am

    Nicely written. You captured the passage perfectly.

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    • Christina says

      October 8, 2020 at 9:07 pm

      Thanks for reading, Tom!

      Reply
  3. Susan F. Reid says

    October 6, 2020 at 9:58 am

    Good for her. Nice twist.

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    • Christina says

      October 8, 2020 at 9:06 pm

      Thanks Susan!

      Reply
  4. June Rogers says

    October 6, 2020 at 10:24 am

    Loved the use of the graduation robe as metaphor for her moving on. Well done!

    Reply
  5. Eric says

    August 9, 2021 at 5:24 pm

    Fantastic!

    Reply

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