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Communion

December 5, 2015 4 Comments

Communion

By K. Rawson

He came across the first box in the dining room—crumpled newspaper strewn across the floor and a jumble of good china on the table. They were the formal dishes, for the sort of dinners they never had.

“Mary?”

In the kitchen, he found two more half-unpacked boxes. Her grandmother’s things, he realized. She hadn’t touched the stuff since the old woman died. I’ll sort these later, she’d said as she shelved them.

“Mary?”

He peered into the darkened den where he found her, holding her grandmother’s heirloom wine glass—half empty. “How’d it go at the doctor’s?”

She looked away.

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  1. Sue says

    December 5, 2015 at 11:16 am

    This is a very good suspense building story. I had lots of questions!

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  2. Michelle says

    December 5, 2015 at 3:05 pm

    Why didn’t he go to the doctor with her?!

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  3. Joanne Fritz says

    December 5, 2015 at 4:55 pm

    Lovely. Very subtle and a bit sad.

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    December 10, 2015 at 4:14 pm

    Such a bittersweet little story. The last sad line says it all. Excellent job!

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