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Confusion

June 27, 2016 2 Comments

Confusion

By Perry McDaid

He stared at the back door, the bolt, the handle, the Georgian wire in the reinforced window.

He stared at the unhelpful yellow Post-it.

He shook his head and almost turned.

The carer rapped at the window.

“You’ve stuck the wrong one on again, Billy, haven’t you?” she called, her voice muffled by the intervening door. “It’s a blank from the wrong pad.”

She had a nice smile.

Patiently, Shirley reminded him who she was by pointing at the ‘Friends Gallery’ snaps on the fridge door, and guided him through the motions of unlocking and opening the door via exaggerated gesticulation.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    June 27, 2016 at 5:26 pm

    Sad and bittersweet; I liked it.

    Reply
  2. dimitriosotis says

    June 28, 2016 at 6:59 am

    a moment sketched.

    Reply

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