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Consideration

July 17, 2017 9 Comments

Consideration

By Dante A. Murray

My nervous breakdown was a lousy break for all concerned.

Vacation plans changed, down payments forfeited.

Returning home after months of electric shock therapy, I was instructed by several of my immediate family to “never do THAT again.”

If I felt myself slipping too far down The Rabbit Hole and the washing machine began repeating its mantra of “MoonJack” on the second cold rinse cycle, I’d do some deep breathing exercises.

Show some consideration for the rest of your family, was the message in the bottle.

I realized the error of my ways and decided to have my next breakdown catered.

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  1. glkamens says

    July 17, 2017 at 4:47 am

    Glad the EST was successful, Dante. When I was in the mental hospital, I was told that, after a breakdown, you came out a better person!. Congrats.

    Reply
    • Dante Murray says

      July 18, 2017 at 10:47 am

      Thanks for your feedback.

      Reply
  2. Lesley Mace says

    July 17, 2017 at 4:55 am

    Love the ironic twist at the end!

    Reply
  3. KC Wilder says

    July 17, 2017 at 5:56 am

    Phenomenal. Such a candid and searing take on family.

    Reply
  4. Roy Dorman says

    July 17, 2017 at 6:57 am

    Nicely done, Dante.

    Reply
  5. b. says

    July 17, 2017 at 8:54 am

    Yup! WHEN you have the chance and are able plan for it… go first class. Well done.

    Reply
  6. Bobby Warner says

    July 17, 2017 at 6:09 pm

    Surreal, totally off the wall, and typical for you, Dante. Another whopping-good winner!

    Reply
  7. kay says

    July 18, 2017 at 7:55 am

    love, love, love, love, loved it.

    Reply
  8. Dante Murray says

    July 18, 2017 at 10:53 am

    Thank you all for your feedback. I always look forward to how a piece will be received. I value your comments, any and all of them.

    Reply

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