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Constellation Run

February 19, 2016 8 Comments

Constellation Run

By Sara Codair

When Grandma died, you told me she became an angel. If I wanted to see her, I just had to look up to the stars. I believed you until my science teacher said stars were simply burning balls of gas.

At thirty, I moved to the city where stars were invisible.

“Come home,” you said.

I ignored you.

“I miss you,” you said.

I stopped returning your calls.

Then you were gone, and I was laying on the grass while my sisters cleaned out your house.

Cirrus clouds flowed across the night sky revealing your ghostly form, illuminated by the stars.

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  1. Nicholas Cook says

    February 19, 2016 at 9:14 am

    Beautiful.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    February 19, 2016 at 10:52 am

    A tender story of regret. This is a winner!

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  3. Sara says

    February 19, 2016 at 3:28 pm

    Thank you!

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  4. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 19, 2016 at 10:26 pm

    Beautiful indeed.

    Reply
  5. Hawksword says

    February 20, 2016 at 4:23 am

    Don’t those scientists just ALWAYS strip the romance from life. Sad and lovely.

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  6. Mary says

    March 1, 2016 at 7:03 am

    Inspiring, reminding me sometimes we don’t get another chance. Going out to see my Mom today ?

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  7. Patricia says

    March 9, 2016 at 6:07 am

    Very beautiful imagery, but sad.

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  8. Rebecca says

    March 15, 2016 at 6:53 pm

    I love how efficiently you tell a familiar story in fresh, crisp language and imagery. This rings true!

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