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Cool Rivers

May 12, 2015 8 Comments

Cool Rivers by Maureen Mooney

By Maureen Mooney

Closeted in the chilly first floor flat above the Charity shop, Sylvie wrapped the crocheted blanket tightly around her. Nestled in her trembling hands, the letter she had received that morning quivered in her lap. Cool Rivers had died. Cool Rivers, minstrel, laughing poet, love of her life.
After the Summer of ’69 she had chosen the security of the known, left him to tread the hippie trail to the Spanish mountains alone.

She should have gone too.

From the TV screen Barnaby was summoning Jones, as a single tear slid down onto the envelope smudging her name into a flower.

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  1. Jane White says

    May 12, 2015 at 9:34 am

    Love this. Beautifully written.

    Reply
  2. skylarking4fun - Rebecca says

    May 12, 2015 at 7:03 am

    This is such a tender and Braddock story Maureen. I look forward to reading many more!

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  3. skylarking4fun - Rebecca says

    May 12, 2015 at 7:04 am

    Beautiful…. Not Braddock. Predictive text!

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    • maureen mooney says

      May 12, 2015 at 7:51 am

      Thanks Rebecca.:-) lol

      Reply
  4. Pattyann McCarthy says

    May 12, 2015 at 9:59 am

    Extremely sensory! Very well written. Great story Maureen.

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  5. Shermie Rayne says

    May 12, 2015 at 12:53 pm

    Very nice!!!

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  6. Ralph W Hueske says

    May 13, 2015 at 8:29 am

    Beautiful story. Love how you did that in only 101 words.

    Reply
  7. Tony Press says

    May 13, 2015 at 1:07 pm

    Excellent, just excellent. I’ve often sat with a 93-year old while she watches Barnaby Jones – oh, the stories we all have, some told, some not.

    Reply

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