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February 24, 2016 4 Comments

Covers

By David Pela

It was a truce; an uneasy truce, but a truce that worked.

During the day, they stayed in the crawl space under the house. It was spacious with curtains of thick spider webs. The ground had a patina of dried cat and mouse shit.

At sundown, they moved under the front porch. It was not as roomy but certainly more dangerous to family members or unsuspecting guests.

And at night, only one of them was allowed into the house.

He assumed they took turns or had some form of rotation in place.

Only one was allowed under his bed each night.

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  1. Ali Nahajski says

    February 24, 2016 at 9:16 am

    Like this one David! I thought it might be monster related, but imaginary monsters are even better; great twist.

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  2. majokmindfuleating says

    February 24, 2016 at 11:59 am

    Nicely done with a bit of mystery

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  3. Scott Shields says

    February 24, 2016 at 5:11 pm

    This summoned up memories from childhood. Well done, Dave!

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 25, 2016 at 9:03 am

    Are they cats? kids? mice? snakes? monsters? unbalanced humans? This is a great “Keep them guessing” story, David.

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