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CPS Case File #73

May 27, 2024 4 Comments

By Deanna Salser

“Why do I have to go live with a stranger?” I snuggled closer to her, burying my face in her breast. She reached beneath my chin and tilted my face toward hers.

“Mommy just needs a few days, maybe a week. Then I’ll come get you. I promise.”

My lips trembled but I knew my tears would hurt her so I clamped them down.

“If I’m good, will you come tomorrow?”

“Oh baby girl! You’re always good!” Now she was crying. She was hugging me too tightly but I bore it in silence, as if I knew I’d get no more.

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  1. Vivian says

    May 27, 2024 at 12:29 pm

    Poignant

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  2. lesley bungay says

    May 28, 2024 at 1:51 am

    Such emotion I so few words. Great story!

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  3. Bud says

    May 29, 2024 at 4:36 pm

    Such a sad story told very well.

    Reply
  4. Bonnie says

    May 29, 2024 at 6:17 pm

    Just a few words to convey so much deprivation. Well done.

    Reply

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