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Creation

April 3, 2016 12 Comments

Creation

By Stephen Daniels

Sara frames her world on the canvas, her mind bristling. She can paint a planet with no life, swirling gas clouds circling the world for eternity.

Sara considers a world of doubt, one she can’t interact with. Its inhabitants question their existence, unaware of the creator and her power to destroy them.

Or she could construct a world where ambiguity is controlled.  Inhabitants’ fates are decided by simple choices—yes or no.

Sara washes the paint off her hands and sits down. She considers all possible numbers and permutations.

Her hand hovers over the keyboard.

In the beginning, she presses one.

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  1. Grady Manus says

    April 3, 2016 at 11:13 am

    Nice.

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 3, 2016 at 11:31 am

      Thanks Grady! I’m delighted you liked it.

      Reply
  2. Vesna McMaster says

    April 3, 2016 at 12:59 pm

    Curious piece. Kind of hypnotic. Interesting use of the flash form.

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 4, 2016 at 10:13 am

      Thanks Vesna.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    April 3, 2016 at 7:03 pm

    Creation is never a scientific art; just ask any writer or artist who is truly inspired! I can relate to this one, Stephen. Good job.

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 4, 2016 at 10:13 am

      Thanks Bobby, I’m glad you can see what I was trying 🙂

      Reply
  4. Smila W Planete says

    April 4, 2016 at 1:14 am

    A thoughtful genesis. I enjoyed the read.

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 4, 2016 at 10:14 am

      Thank you Smila. That means a lot to me!

      Reply
  5. hildasheehan says

    April 4, 2016 at 6:00 pm

    “Or she could construct a world where ambiguity is controlled.” Poetry Mr Daniels, poetry.

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 5, 2016 at 11:44 am

      This is quite clearly not poetry 🙂

      Reply
  6. Grishilda says

    April 4, 2016 at 6:03 pm

    yes or no? I say an absolute no! Why does she get all the power?

    Reply
    • Stephen Kirk Daniels says

      April 5, 2016 at 11:45 am

      Thanks Grishilda, your comments are important to us… we will try our best to incorporate your feedback into everything we do (and don’t do!)

      Reply

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