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Cretaceous Commute

March 26, 2019 7 Comments

Cretaceous Commute

By Steven Barrett

My daily commute has become increasingly difficult lately. There’s the usual gridlock, of course, but now there are the dinosaurs too.
Traffic reports on the radio announce that the time portal is still being repaired. That’s been two days now.

Suddenly my car shakes as a Triceratops lumbers between the vehicles ahead. Another delay. An Ankylosaurus smashes a delivery truck with its tail; boxes and their contents scatter across the road. More time lost. Then I hear a thunderous roar. There’s a T. rex further up ahead.

I close my eyes and turn the music up—I’m not going anywhere soon.

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  1. Karisa Moore says

    March 26, 2019 at 2:17 pm

    Love, love the last line. Just another gridlock day in an alternate universe.

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  2. David Berger says

    March 26, 2019 at 2:35 pm

    Good idea but clumsy.

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  3. Roy Dorman says

    March 26, 2019 at 2:45 pm

    Hey, Steven, I really liked this one.It’s always good when a story idea is used that hasn’t been used before.

    Reply
  4. June says

    March 26, 2019 at 3:11 pm

    Had a good laugh.

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  5. Brian says

    March 26, 2019 at 6:24 pm

    Well written and funny story.

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  6. David Derey says

    March 26, 2019 at 7:35 pm

    original stuff. write on

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  7. Meghashri says

    March 26, 2019 at 9:02 pm

    Great story!

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