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Curious Frankie

October 13, 2016 8 Comments

Curious Frankie

By Rick Trushel

Frankie took three shriveled-up carrots with their green tops from the refrigerator and left them on a chipped dish. With a fat, stubby pencil Frankie printed a thank you note to the Easter Bunny on lined tablet paper.

On Easter morning, behind the drapes there was a woven basket filled with tangled strips of yellow cellophane, topped with chocolate bunnies, marshmallow peeps, a handful of jelly beans, and a blue, dyed egg with F-r-a-n-k-i-e stenciled on it.

When Frankie checked the fridge, three dehydrated carrots stared back.

“There is no Easter Bunny,” Frankie’s mother whispered and gathered her child closer.

“Liar.”

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  1. Irene P. Smith says

    October 13, 2016 at 9:37 am

    I really like this piece. I particularly like the last line.

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  2. Aggie Zivaljevic says

    October 13, 2016 at 9:43 am

    Like a lightning bolt straight into my heart.

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  3. Carrick says

    October 13, 2016 at 11:35 am

    The consequence: Cold revenge in the form of a rebellious teen…..

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  4. Jeanne Althouse says

    October 13, 2016 at 12:56 pm

    Someone else is good a love stories! Great job Rick!

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  5. M.C. Neuda says

    October 13, 2016 at 2:30 pm

    Sweet! (At least, that’s how I took it.) Thanks, Rick!

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  6. Bobby Warner says

    October 13, 2016 at 3:43 pm

    Realistic. Frankie’s last word would probably have been mine if I had been in his position as a youngster. A Winner!

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  7. YT says

    October 17, 2016 at 9:56 pm

    Ooh, I was mad when the mom said that, but the last line makes you realize her reverse psychology. Love it!

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  8. Tony Acarasiddhi Press says

    October 24, 2016 at 9:06 am

    So fine! Yes, a love story, ending with a hug.

    Reply

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