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Dad

January 23, 2016 13 Comments

Dad

By Prospero Dae

He wanted to be a superhero.

He’d imagine his damsel, in a white frock, the memory of the scent of her freshly washed hair intoxicating him, trapped in a dungeon at the mercy of some evil toy maker or—as in his most recent and pellucid adventure—a maniacal cotton candy baron. He’d don a velvety cape, as black as the ecstatic darkness of a lover’s night, and bring justice to a world gone mad.

All his life, from the auroral miracle of birth, he’d wanted to be a superhero.

And now, having been handed a cigar, he just became one.

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    January 23, 2016 at 11:37 am

    Absolutely beautiful.

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  2. Susanne says

    January 23, 2016 at 1:11 pm

    Awww. The best kind of hero.

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  3. Barry O'Farrell says

    January 23, 2016 at 2:54 pm

    A real hero.

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  4. John La Briola says

    January 23, 2016 at 2:58 pm

    Very sweet. You’ve earned some paternity leave, Daddy-O.

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  5. Bobby Warner says

    January 23, 2016 at 7:45 pm

    That last line–a beautiful winner. Well done, Prospero!

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  6. Mary says

    January 24, 2016 at 1:31 pm

    Wow – love this! Perfect Prospero ~

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  7. Joan C. says

    February 1, 2016 at 9:22 am

    You’ve put your protagonist’s ‘desire’ front and center in this piece, and it’s fulfilled in an unexpected, fun (and sweet) way in the final line. Nice writing!

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  8. j a knight says

    February 1, 2016 at 9:26 am

    Lovely. Congratulations!

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  9. tomorrowdefinitely says

    February 1, 2016 at 10:12 am

    great story! It needs very little to be a superhero(ine) 🙂

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  10. Bruce Goodman says

    February 1, 2016 at 12:12 pm

    Sniff! Lovely!

    Reply
  11. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    February 2, 2016 at 10:34 am

    I can see why your micro flash was a winner! Excellent work!

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  12. kirajessup says

    February 20, 2016 at 3:44 pm

    Beautiful story 🙂

    Reply
  13. Kerry E.B. Black says

    March 14, 2016 at 8:37 pm

    Nice.

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