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Dandelion

October 2, 2018 14 Comments

Dandelion

By Molly Prep

Her father called her Dandelion, because a tuft of gold hair topped her lanky frame.

At thirteen, Dandelion was full of whimsy and love for the world around her. She spent most days wandering nearby fields, dreaming (with her eyes open) among unruly grass and weeds.

Until the day the wolf found her—Young. Soft. Alone.

All things gold turned white.

The wolf huffed, and puffed, and blew Dandelion to pieces.

Wishes rushed from her hair and sank into the field’s dirt. Each strand took root and made a solemn promise as they grew: their sister would never be alone again.

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  1. cascondaville says

    October 2, 2018 at 7:26 am

    Just wow!

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  2. Susan says

    October 2, 2018 at 8:27 am

    The metaphor and moral are great.

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  3. Laurel says

    October 2, 2018 at 9:21 am

    Exquisite, Molly. Devastating and impactful

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  4. Donna says

    October 2, 2018 at 9:37 am

    Beautiful Molly. It expresses both the painful loss and the hope inspired so simply and profoundly .

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  5. Faith Addiss says

    October 2, 2018 at 9:54 am

    Lovely!

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  6. Meghashri says

    October 2, 2018 at 9:27 pm

    Amazing! What a great story!

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  7. Danielle Harris says

    October 3, 2018 at 6:16 am

    Story was amazing, says so much in such few words. Loved it

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  8. Susan says

    October 3, 2018 at 8:57 am

    Beautiful! It begs to be read more than once…

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  9. lisarey1990 says

    October 3, 2018 at 10:59 am

    A really excellent read.

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  10. dee says

    October 3, 2018 at 11:18 am

    love this.
    you are so very talented.

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  11. Bobby Warner says

    October 3, 2018 at 2:21 pm

    Truly a modern day fairy tale. Loved it. Give us more–yes, indeed!

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  12. Julia (Schwartz) says

    October 3, 2018 at 5:49 pm

    Not only beautifully written, but necessary.

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  13. Gabriela says

    October 4, 2018 at 6:47 pm

    Great job Molly!

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  14. Philip Scholz says

    October 7, 2018 at 12:07 am

    Hi Molly. Great story … on par with all your work. Stop raising the bar. 😉

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