As the lost soul frolicked in the forest, she came upon food, given by Mother Nature, growing from the ground next to a mossy green tree. She breathlessly devoured these raw dirty vegetables. She heard sounds coming from behind her. There was a little girl with the voice of an angel. The child hurried away and she glided after it. She found herself at the edge of a violent waterfall. As the child plummeted down, the lost soul fearfully dived after and dropped deep into the water. She saw there was no child, and red enclosed her as her body numbed.
A nice, quiet, ghostly story. Good job.