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Deadfall

March 15, 2017 2 Comments

Deadfall

By Derek Harmening

A groundhog stone, an abstracted misstep, a weightlessness, a glimpse of dappled blue.

Margot extends a palm. The earth leaps up to greet it.

A shrieking scaphoid, a fractured root system, a nauseating Tilt-a-Whirl. A filigree of settling dust. Quiet.

Margot wakens. Her wrist is a baby bird. The trailhead yawns.

A darkening, a chill. A caterwauling of coyotes. A fear as pure as childbirth.

Margot prophesies: a party of rangers, flashlights aloft, casting its net of crosshatched beams. A porcelain body, rigor-tinged, fodder for scavengers. Hers.

Margot yearns for girlhood: bomb pops, chlorine, sulfur-clouded Julys.

Margot prays. Margot crawls.

Margot—

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 15, 2017 at 11:58 am

    Really like your use of repetition in the last few lines, Derek. Produces a greater overall impact.

    Reply
  2. Robb says

    March 16, 2017 at 10:52 am

    Very nice work!

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