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Desperado

October 6, 2016 10 Comments

Desperado

By James B. Revell

“I don’t know how the fire started. I was just passing the house…” John’s expression gave nothing away.

He thought about his life so far: his dysfunctional family, the unsuccessful placements, the wankers in social services, and the Filth: the dumb bastards still didn’t know about the car…

“Have you anything else to say before I pass sentence?”

John looked the judge in the eye.

“No,” he said and sat down.

The psychologist’s report commented on John’s intelligence and the threat he posed to society.

Leaving the dock, John pictured his stepfather’s car, a souped-up Cortina with its brake lines cut.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    October 6, 2016 at 8:48 am

    Clever story in that it reveals the guy’s guilt without specifically stating it. Liked this one!

    Reply
    • James B. REVELL says

      October 7, 2016 at 4:56 am

      Thank you, Bobby. I suspect that former colleagues in the Met Police and in Special Education would disagree as to where all the guilt should lie.

      Reply
  2. tamaramiles (@tamaramilesSC) says

    October 6, 2016 at 9:13 am

    A wonderful piece with nice complexities. Have you ever thought about a life of crime? :>)

    Reply
    • James B. REVELL says

      October 7, 2016 at 5:02 am

      Thank you Tamara. Life is full of complications, don’t you think? Sometimes the distinction between right and wrong can be blurred…..

      Reply
  3. Joanna Bressler says

    October 7, 2016 at 12:33 am

    I liked this one too. A good ending — satisfying in some strange way.

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    • James B. REVELL says

      October 7, 2016 at 5:05 am

      Thank you kindly Joanna.

      Reply
  4. David D says

    October 9, 2016 at 9:26 am

    I had to read it twice, but that’s not bad for such a short piece. I like that I get some answer at the end, but am also left wondering. The stories that stick with me th longest are ones I wonder about. Well done.

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    • James B. REVELL says

      October 10, 2016 at 10:14 am

      Thank you, David, for your thoughtful response.

      Reply
  5. Subhankar Biswas says

    October 20, 2016 at 9:27 am

    smack on the head! very powerful, my friend.

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    • James B. REVELL says

      October 22, 2016 at 11:12 am

      Thank you, Subhankar. I’m grateful for your feedback.

      Reply

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