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Desperate Measures

September 2, 2019 15 Comments

Desperate Measures

By Ada Pelonia

Kayla rummages the garbage bins behind the grocery store. Nothing to eat. It’s ten degrees outside and the only clothing to warm her is a thick, worn-out frock.

Two days without food, Kayla enters the store and grabs a bag of chips from the first shelf. Within seconds, a clerk grabs her wrist.

The police arrive within minutes but she refuses to answer questions. She refuses to answer at the station too. They lock her up, promise to arraign her in the morning. They feed her a bologna sandwich and canned tomato soup. She hasn’t slept under a blanket in weeks.

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Comments

  1. Mary Patton says

    September 2, 2019 at 7:58 am

    Excellent! Great story and very thought provoking. I love it. Wish I’d said that. Lol.

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 2:47 pm

      Thank you, Mary!

      Reply
  2. glkamens says

    September 2, 2019 at 11:19 am

    Well done, Ada! Indeed thought-provoking and pungent.

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 2:47 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  3. Vivian says

    September 2, 2019 at 12:23 pm

    ???

    Reply
  4. Vivian says

    September 2, 2019 at 12:25 pm

    That was not the comment that I made!

    I think it was a wonderful story.

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 2:48 pm

      Thank you, Vivian!

      Reply
  5. Vivian says

    September 2, 2019 at 12:25 pm

    ???

    Reply
  6. Angie says

    September 2, 2019 at 2:50 pm

    A great story. Beautifully written and moving too.

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 5:38 pm

      Thank you, Angie!

      Reply
  7. 1e200 says

    September 2, 2019 at 6:55 pm

    Excellent. I really like how you do not explicitly connect the dots

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 8:01 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  8. Lisa Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    September 2, 2019 at 7:03 pm

    Nice ending.

    Reply
    • Ada Pelonia says

      September 2, 2019 at 8:02 pm

      Thank you, Lisa!

      Reply
  9. Michael Mcloughlin says

    September 5, 2019 at 8:09 pm

    Good story. Well written – and on a very important issue.

    Reply

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