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Detour

August 24, 2015 4 Comments

Detour

By Krystyna Fedosejevs

I chose an unfamiliar route, bypassed a café he and I had frequented after work.

Walking past children playing street soccer, laundry hanging over balcony rails. Backtracking whenever the direction felt wrong. The sun was my guide.

Eyes filling. Mind preoccupied with hurt. Betrayal. I expressed my love for him, and what did he do? Admitted interest in someone else. I didn’t wish to see him smiling at her over a latté.

As I entered familiar surroundings, my apartment building in view, a dog charged towards me. His. I turned. Stopped.

He stood before me; I plunged into his open arms.

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  1. Tony Press says

    August 24, 2015 at 10:59 am

    It’s nice to see a happy ending once in a while. Good one.

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    • Krystyna Fedosejevs says

      August 24, 2015 at 10:10 pm

      Thanks for your comment, Tony. Originally, I had a sad ending. Then I took another look.

      Reply
  2. J R Hampton says

    August 25, 2015 at 1:28 am

    A picturesque story with a dollop of love. An enjoyable read.

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    • Krystyna Fedosejevs says

      August 25, 2015 at 8:11 pm

      Thank you, JR.

      Reply

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