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Down to the VA

November 30, 2018 3 Comments

Down to the VA

By Jeffrey Paolano

Pearson lives two bus stops from the VA. The first stop has a four-sided shelter. Stop two doesn’t even have a bench. Pearson leans against a wall to keep his feet.

A man strides towards him, his gaze fixed on Pearson. The man wears a polo shirt; Pearson wears a 1st Air Cav cap patch.

“You a Vet?” the man asks.

“Yasir, goin down to the VA.”

“You want a ride?”

“Obliged, sir.”

The magnificence of the man’s car takes Pearson’s breath.

The man prattles on, white talk.

Pearson is clenched, praying his bladder don’t release on the man’s pretty car.

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  1. Susan says

    November 30, 2018 at 6:37 pm

    It’s nice that someone is helping veterans. One veteran told me it is a veteran’s responsibility to help other veterans with referrals and discussions.

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  2. Jo Ann patterson says

    December 1, 2018 at 5:42 pm

    Compassion and a little humor. You could write quiet humor too. I liked it. Well done.

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  3. SUNIL VINAYAK GANU says

    December 2, 2018 at 7:31 am

    Unexpected! Totally!

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