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Dread Expectation

October 22, 2015 5 Comments

Dread Expectation

By Brittany M Harrell

Nemamiah’s trembling hands surrendered in terror to the chains that held him to his deathbed. Heart racing, he felt as though his lungs could barely contend.

He looked past his purpled arm to Lunaera, standing among the masses waiting to witness his execution. Eyes were fixed, focused, as if love’s presence might somehow lessen his imminent agony.

Behind him, the sickening sound of leather uncoiling in earth was enough to send his heart plummeting. A whistle cracked through the air, accompanied by a searing flame that had every nerve in his body writhing. Rebellion would prove to be a bloody garment.

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  1. Deb Alewine says

    October 22, 2015 at 9:08 am

    Excellent !

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  2. Christina Butcher says

    October 22, 2015 at 4:55 pm

    So good!

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  3. Krystal says

    October 23, 2015 at 11:14 am

    Loved it!

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  4. Jon Harris says

    October 25, 2015 at 7:02 pm

    Excellent read! Your Descriptive writing patterns are phenomenal; this excerpt painted a vivid picture throughout my mind. Looking forward to reading future stories and eventually your books.

    Reply
  5. Pat Barta says

    November 13, 2015 at 1:59 pm

    More good stuff! Keep writing!

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