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Drivin’ Cross-Country

January 29, 2024 3 Comments

By Charles Gray

Eighteen-wheelers surround me like killer whales on the hunt. They’re hungry. Eighty miles-per-hour hungry. It’s revving up my appetite. I’m the dolphin, weaving and searching for a safe space in this river of metal. The goal—avoid getting squashed or side-swiped into a concrete barrier. I follow highway etiquette, but I’ll pass on the right when the old whale has trouble swimming uphill. The surrounding landscape looks peaceful—rolling hills on the horizon and cows grazing in the fields, but on the highway it’s a battle for supremacy. As dusk creeps in, I shed the dorsal fin and go stealth.

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  1. Rudolph Ferrro says

    January 29, 2024 at 7:28 am

    Wonderful writing. Gave me a feel for what we all have to do on the highway too. Survival of the fittest.

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    • Charles Gray says

      January 29, 2024 at 11:56 am

      Yes indeed, Rudolph, thanks for your comment.

      Reply
  2. HelenZ says

    January 31, 2024 at 7:38 am

    Awesome – I love the imagery! And you’re not wrong about driving with the big rigs.

    Reply

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