By Smila W. Planete
Ear buds in, music pulsating through her body, it’s a glorious day for a run. Sun is shining; mountains are majestic. She quickens the pace: around the corner, past the rose garden, up the shaded boulevard, across the manicured park. A nod to the Duke, flanked by his stately greyhounds. The palace is just ahead.
Totally exhausted, she yanks out the ear buds and collapses onto the sidewalk, careful to avoid the hypodermic needles, the used condoms—wondering if she should call 911 for the dude passed out in the dirt lot across the street, him and his two mangy mutts.
Good imagery: The seamier side of life as seen through the eyes of a dedicated jogger. Unusual, and I like it!
Thanks!
Nice!
Thanks for reading!
Great choice of details to contrast the two sides. Excellent work with conflict–inner vs outer. Nice writing :).
Much appreciated, Joan!
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