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Emptiness

December 16, 2024 8 Comments

By Juliette Beauchamp

The start of school is a relief to Ben. At home, the cabinets are bare, the busted refrigerator unplugged. School means two meals a day, free for those who qualify. He qualifies. At lunchtime, a gloved hand slips him extra rolls over the counter.

Ben carries his tray to an unoccupied classroom where he can pretend he doesn’t mind eating alone. There is a girl’s bathroom next door, the sounds of self-loathing drifting down the hall. He wants to tell the girl she’s already beautiful. He wants to ask her for tomorrow’s lunch, if she’s just going to throw it up.

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Comments

  1. Jo Kerr says

    December 18, 2024 at 7:31 am

    Beautifully written! Great last line…

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  2. PK says

    December 18, 2024 at 9:33 am

    Delivers a one-two punch, Well crafted.

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  3. Pat R. says

    December 18, 2024 at 10:37 am

    Wow, powerful! Well done!

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  4. Rosemarie Schaut says

    December 18, 2024 at 11:10 am

    I am a high school teacher and so, this resonates for me. Powerful and heartbreaking.

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  5. Toni Brayer says

    December 18, 2024 at 12:12 pm

    Such pathos! Heartbreaking

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  6. Janet says

    December 18, 2024 at 12:32 pm

    So sad. So real. Well-done

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  7. Sue D says

    December 18, 2024 at 4:07 pm

    Thoughtful and reflective.

    Reply
  8. jaxson-dan says

    March 16, 2025 at 12:50 pm

    anorexia is awful. so is hunger. thanks for the story

    Reply

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