By Hueston Milbrand
Outside, the old marquee shivered once and went black.
Inside, dust covered the threadbare velvet.
Delphine sat alone in the crumbling theater, tears flickering in the dimmed light.
A golden-haired girl twirled across the screen, radiant, untouchable.
Years curled away like burning film until they had become one. She fell into his arms and he into her gaze.
“All we have is this moment, darling,” he said.
“Then let’s never let it end,” she replied.
Silvered faces arose from the shadows and swelled into thunderous applause.
The douser clicked; the screen went black.
The darkness folded in. The theater was empty.
I really like the way you’ve blended nostalgia and the passage of time in this piece. It reminds me of the way there are many old theaters in Chicago that have fallen to neglect, and they’re not just old places
Thanks very much, Eli. Truly. A story isn’t complete until it a reader connects with it. Words can’t express how fulfilling that is.