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Erasing Memories

October 31, 2017 2 Comments

Erasing Memories

By Jason M Rubin

In my left mirror, I saw her gaining on me. In my right mirror, she seemed farther away, although I knew she was closer than she appeared.

She and I were closer than we appeared, as well. As siblings a scant two years apart, we fought as kids, but we developed a bond after college. In the thirty-odd years since then, we have seen eye to eye more often than not.

But this time is different. This time, things will change for good. As long as I get to Mom’s house first. As long as she still knows who I am.

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  1. Daria Kill says

    November 1, 2017 at 12:15 am

    Is there more?

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  2. Ariffa says

    November 2, 2017 at 9:12 am

    Heart-wrenching. Great job, Jason.

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