Win Cash Prizes & Get Professional Feedback @ Flash Fiction Magazine
Learn More
  • Skip to primary navigation
  • Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

101 Words

101 Word Short Stories

  • Subscribe
  • About
  • Submissions
  • Volunteer

Eruptions

August 8, 2019 5 Comments

Eruptions

By Lawrence P. McGuire

Mom, eighty-six, wears me down.

A dutiful daughter, I live in one mode: worn out. I tire of toweling up Mom’s warm puddles, stinking like a drowned mouse.

In my front room, Mom screams. In the downstairs bathroom, she trills. She cries out from morning till night.

Mom delights in stroking my eggshell ego: “Best daughter of all time.”

Today I drove Mom to see her gerontologist. He said, “Let her scream, but keep your windows locked.”

Doc doesn’t understand. For months all my windows have been shut tight.

What I want to know is, when do I get to scream?

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on Threads (Opens in new window) Threads
  • Share on Bluesky (Opens in new window) Bluesky
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • More
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
  • Share on Telegram (Opens in new window) Telegram
  • Share on Mastodon (Opens in new window) Mastodon
  • Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Nextdoor (Opens in new window) Nextdoor
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest

The Power of Imagery with Nina Schuyler

September 12 & 13 on Zoom
Enrollment closes Thursday, September 3 at 7:00 PM Pacific

If your descriptions are vivid but your stories still feel thin, this workshop is for you.

Join award-winning author Nina Schuyler to learn the difference between description, which tells a reader what things look like, and imagery, which carries plot, character, and meaning at the same time.

In just two days, you'll learn to choose images that hold emotion without naming it, pair them so each one deepens the other, and build patterns that gather meaning as the story moves.

Learn More and Enroll

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. tskraghu says

    August 8, 2019 at 7:41 am

    One of these days, I suspect, she’s going to leave a window open.

    Reply
  2. David Daniel says

    August 9, 2019 at 8:56 am

    A well and economically told tale!

    Reply
  3. Debbie Settle says

    August 9, 2019 at 4:11 pm

    I feel your pain, sister. Most of us get there, eventually. Someone once said that “old age is not for he squeamish.” Watching it happen with the person you’ve known the longest in your life, is not for the squeamish either. Stay strong. Good things come to those that wait. Sometimes it just SEEMS never-ending!

    Reply
  4. Holly Rexrode says

    August 12, 2019 at 2:07 pm

    Excellent emotions and descriptions. Great job.

    Reply
  5. Judith Joubert says

    August 13, 2019 at 7:44 am

    Love it. Well done

    Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Primary Sidebar

Search Stories

The end.