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Escaped

May 15, 2015 4 Comments

Escaped by Patience

By Patience

“Who’s there?” Doug called, his familiar voice echoing louder through the dark halls than the chimes of the ancient doorbell.

“Don’t know yet,” Jane hollered, her annoyance clear, yet she smiled at the thought of late-night visitors providing her with escape.

She trudged down the hall, yanking up heavy skirts that kept her as trapped as this old house while Doug’s radio screeched about poor crops and escaped prisoners.

The bell chimed again as her fingers touched the knob.

That night, Jane escaped.

The investigators said the killer chose the house because of the unhappiness leaking out from under the door.

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  1. Firdaus Parvez says

    May 15, 2015 at 10:27 pm

    This is good! Really good!

    Reply
    • Patience says

      May 15, 2015 at 11:29 pm

      Thank you! I’m happy you liked it! 🙂

      Reply
  2. Peter Barden says

    May 19, 2015 at 3:58 pm

    I really liked this.

    Reply
    • Patience says

      May 19, 2015 at 6:53 pm

      Thanks! I’m so glad! 🙂 🙂

      Reply

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