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Exodus Reborn

December 19, 2020 6 Comments

By Joshua Nash

Papa passes the Seder plate and pours more wine into our cups. Mama places a sprig of parsley in front of each of us.

“Other nights,” we chant, “we eat all vegetables.”

Papa bows his head and dips the herb into his cup. I chew the bitter leaves. The wine leaves a harsh taste as it slides down my throat.

Distant shouts of German soldiers shatter the silence. Mama clasps my hand.

“We eat the bitter herbs,” Papa quivers, “to remind us of the bitterness of slavery.” Tears well in his eyes. We sip our wine as the screams grow louder.

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  1. Pamela Raleigh says

    December 19, 2020 at 7:37 am

    A very strong visual created with such few words. Emotional, raw, and terrifying. Good work.

    Reply
    • Joshua Nash says

      December 19, 2020 at 9:17 am

      Thank you, Pamela.

      Reply
  2. Derek says

    December 19, 2020 at 10:18 am

    This paints a picture in a few words. Very good.

    Reply
    • Joshua Nash says

      December 19, 2020 at 10:33 am

      Thanks for reading, Derek.

      Reply
  3. Michael says

    December 19, 2020 at 7:48 pm

    What a powerful scene in so few words…great job!

    Reply
  4. Linda Casper says

    December 20, 2020 at 5:45 am

    This struck a chord.

    Reply

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