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Eyewitness

November 15, 2021 10 Comments

By Martin Hadfield

Imagine, the things they’ve seen:

Dragged from their sleep into bright, white light. Packed tightly together like cattle into trucks—jostling and colliding in confusion and woe. Bruised and dumped from the trucks onto concrete, they’re separated from their families by those who see only inanimate objects. Dispatched north, south, east, and west to their disparate fates, many will freeze under icy skies or wither from the heat. Before being delivered to their final fate, many are whipped, skinned, and even boiled. From Ireland to Idaho they are treated like a blight to society.

Why would God curse potatoes with eyes?

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  1. Sam Smith says

    November 15, 2021 at 4:15 am

    Oh those poor potatoes!

    Reply
  2. Vivian says

    November 15, 2021 at 7:28 am

    Unique!

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  3. Mary A Gorman says

    November 15, 2021 at 11:12 am

    Love this. You drew me in and kept my curiosity alive right to the end; a sign of a great writer. Keep on writing I would like to read more.

    P.S As an Irish woman who loves her spuds, I felt sorry for them in the end

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    • Martin Hadfield says

      November 15, 2021 at 7:53 pm

      Thanks you Mary for the encouraging comments. Wait ’til I start on the ears of corn!!
      Martin

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  4. M says

    November 15, 2021 at 11:16 am

    Loved it.

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  5. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    November 16, 2021 at 8:24 am

    Very clever… well done… you pulled at my heart strings…lol…

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  6. Jen says

    November 17, 2021 at 7:29 am

    Love it!

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  7. Lydia says

    November 17, 2021 at 11:32 pm

    Made it sound like it was about holocaust victims, but no, it was about…potatoes

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  8. dlherrmann says

    November 21, 2021 at 1:03 am

    cute!!

    Reply
  9. Áine Meehan says

    November 23, 2021 at 1:39 pm

    Brilliant!! I feel like a mad murderer now after my plate of spuds. Very good, great pace

    Reply

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